chapter+7

While they were they were watching the film, there was a loud crack outside. Bella screamed, "what was that?" Sam replied "the lightening struck at the tree outside". And turned his attention back to the other friends. Sam protested that they needed more food and drink so Bella stood up and walked into the kitchen. When Bella returned from the kitchen with plates stacked with food, she asked what the time was. "10:00pm replied ....." kindly, "Does any one know how long the film lasts?" "No idea" said the other three. "Ok, it doesn't matter" whispered Bella. "I'm heading to the bathroom". Suddenly there was muted thud followed by a slow groan. "Sorry everyone," moaned Bella down the stairs, "I just that it's pretty dark up there and I Just stubbed my toe!"

wish-make slightly longer
 * good dialouge
 * paints an errie scene