chapter+8

=__Chapter 8__= ==**Everyone hid from Bella, and Sam ran over to switch off the lights quickly. When Bella came back from the toilet they all jumped out on her and said BOO! like ghosts. Bella got a really big scare and she said "dont do that again, you really scared me and its not funny" She screamed so loud that you could probably hear her round the other side of the world. They all sat down and started watching the movie again. (Like a happy family) (But instead they were just mates) Justin kept on making weird noises to scare the girls. He thought it was funny, but they just started laughing at him then got really annoyed with him. Lizzy then said " JUSTIN, WILL YOU BE QUIET AND WATCH THE MOVIE!!" , "ALL I CAN HEAR IS YOUR VOICE MUMBLING IN THE BACKGROUND AND ITS GETTING ON MY NEARVES!" “I CAN’T SEAM TO HEAR A THING THAT’S BEING SAID ON THE TELLY AND IT’S REALLY STARTING TO BUG ME NOW!”**==

**"OK OK, I'LL BE QUIET IF IT MAKES YOU HAPPY" Justin** said **making a funny face behind Lizzy’s back when she wasn't looking.**
==**About 5 minutes later the lights started flickering and then dimed. It was like they were at a disco with the lights flashing on and off. The girls were getting scared and huddled in to each other on the sofa. (Like a bunch of wimps) Bella said "whats happening" Then the light bulb started getting brighter and brighter. Like your mum opening you're curtains in the morning, when it’s really sunny outside and your eyes start to water. IT SUDDENLY EXPLOADED IN TO A THOUSAND PIECES and the room went quiet. It was as if someone had died and they were all silent at the funeral, but they hadn’t. Thank God!! Justin, Lizzy, Sam and Bella were so scared that they hid behind the sofa and started shaking. They were shaking so bad that if you shook them anymore you would start to here a noise like a maraca.**== ==**They then heard voices saying "HELP ME, PLEASE HELP ME!!.... It was as if they were in the HORROR MOVIE!! Trying to escape back out in to the free world with normal people and not with the cartoons on the telly. Then Sam started saying "HELP ME PLEASE"**==


 * sets a good scene
 * good dialouge
 * wok on sentnce structure.