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Bella and Lizzy are sitting in their seats terrified as the axe man comes to another house, then Bella says
=="Justin me and Lizzy are going to the toilet" ( to hide ) ,the axe man strikes and Bella and Lizzy jump out of their seats in fright of the axe man in the movie. Then there`s a knock at the door "I`ll get it"Justin says as he slowly opens the door,the wind blew some dead leaves in and he could see that the rain was getting very hard as the storm started.==

"Me too" replied Lizzy and Sam. Justin goes to close the door and, BANG, lightning strikes as the door slams shut.
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 * good onomatapueia
 * good use of speech