Justin stuttered and fell on to the ground while sam was watching she was screaming out No!!!! Sam,Bella and Lizzie were scared that justin was going to die one of Justins friends checked his pulse he was ok he was going to survive he fainted with shock.What the heck happened there? said Sam, they were all frightened by now and was just wondering what was going on in the house? It's almost like the house is haunted....
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Justin stuttered and fell on to the ground while sam was watching she was screaming out No!!!! Sam, Bella and Lizzie were scared that justin was going to die, one of Justins friends checked his pulse, he was ok he was going to survive. He had just fainted with shock.What the heck happened there? said Sam, they were all frightened by now and were just wondering what was going on in the house? It's almost like the house is haunted....
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Justin stuttered and fell on to the ground while sam was watching she was screaming out No!!!! Sam, Bella and Lizzie were scared that justin was going to die, one of Justins friends checked his pulse, he was ok he was going to survive. He had just fainted with shock.What the heck happened there? said Sam, they were all frightened by now and were just wondering what was going on in the house? It's almost like the house is haunted....
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Good plot
watch for commas and where the should be