One Down, Three To Go.Chapter 13 After that everyone had a drink and settled down into their sleeping bags. They were just about to drift off to sleep but then they heard something. Sam jumped up. It sounded like a slight creaking. Bella was first to speak "I think I speak for all of us and I don't think we're going to get to sleep any time soon” she said. Everyone nodded. Then the door opened with a creak. In the doorway stood a dark silhouette. He was holding an axe! They all backed slowly away until they bumped up against the wall. The man was probably in his early forties. His face was as pale as the moon itself. He stood there still for a few seconds. Everyone began to panic. .No one knew what was going to happen. Then all of a sudden the axe was hurled through the air burying itself into Justin's forehead. The body slowly slid down the wall to the floor in a pool of blood. The pool of blood on top of the cream carpet was bright red and slowly began to cover a larger area of the carpet. Justin was dead there was no chance he could of survived. The body lay on the floor in front of the speechless friends. Perfectly still, completely dead. Lizzie suddenly threw up. Sam screamed at the top of his voice "Run" he shouted.
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After that everyone had a drink and settled down into their sleeping bags. They were just about to drift off to sleep but then they heard something. Sam jumped up. It sounded like a slight creaking. Bella was first to speak "I think I speak for all of us and I don't think we're going to get to sleep any time soon” she said. Everyone nodded. Then the door opened with a creak. In the doorway stood a dark silhouette. He was holding an axe! They all backed slowly away until they bumped up against the wall. The man was probably in his early forties. His face was as pale as the moon itself. He stood there still for a few seconds. Everyone began to panic. .No one knew what was going to happen. Then all of a sudden the axe was hurled through the air burying itself into Justin's forehead. The body slowly slid down the wall to the floor in a pool of blood. The pool of blood on top of the cream carpet was bright red and slowly began to cover a larger area of the carpet. Justin was dead there was no chance he could of survived. The body lay on the floor in front of the speechless friends. Perfectly still, completely dead. Lizzie suddenly threw up. Sam screamed at the top of his voice "Run" he shouted.
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Great Plot
Maybe some more information as this is the main event