Once they all got over that very scary shock, Sam eventually after quite sometime plucked up the courage and opened the door and all they saw was this MASSIVE axe leaned againstthe outside wall in the thunderous storm and suddenly Bella fainted (not surprising). After Bella had recovered she saw Justin holding the axe and again she screamed and fainted. Once the storm had cleared they all peered out of the door and then breathed a sigh of relief, the demented man who had appeared was gone but far away in the woods they heard a pack of wolves howling in the now calm night, “Cool“ Sam said. They all got too scared to keep watching the film so they all went to bed and told horror stories. Just as they were settling down for the monster stories a rapid knocking at the window started, that freaked the four friends out and this time they all screamed"Oh my god why is everything bad happening to us with every single thing, its very strange " Justin said. “Because we're unlucky” said Bella. They heard a gun shot from in the woods and the wolves started howling again which made all the friends jump the height of the roof and then Lizzy fainted again…
*Comical
*good sentence structure
*the font changes half way through so make it the same
Once they all got over that very scary shock, Sam eventually after quite sometime plucked up the courage and opened the door and all they saw was this MASSIVE axe leaned against the outside wall in the thunderous storm and suddenly Bella fainted (not surprising). After Bella had recovered she saw Justin holding the axe and again she screamed and fainted. Once the storm had cleared they all peered out of the door and then breathed a sigh of relief, the demented man who had appeared was gone but far away in the woods they heard a pack of wolves howling in the now calm night, “Cool“ Sam said. They all got too scared to keep watching the film so they all went to bed and told horror stories. Just as they were settling down for the monster stories a rapid knocking at the window started, that freaked the four friends out and this time they all screamed "Oh my god why is everything bad happening to us with every single thing, its very strange " Justin said.
“Because we're unlucky” said Bella. They heard a gun shot from in the woods and the wolves started howling again which made all the friends jump the height of the roof and then Lizzy fainted again…
*Comical
*good sentence structure
*the font changes half way through so make it the same