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Police in the bag
Chapter 19
The police asked Bella, Sam and Lizzie where the head was. Lizzie shaking like a
leaf pointed to the bag which was still sitting beside the shining river. Bella started to throw up. They all hugged as tight as possible, tears rolling down there eyes like rain. They saw the police
walk run over and open the bag. One of the police officers looked away {Police in horror as the two police men took out Justin's head. Sam wanting to cry but too shocked to even move an
eye stood and stared at the police. Bella just sitting on the ground stretching like a dog getting its tail stood on. Lizzie crying like a new born baby, looking at her feet covered
in blood. A police officer came over and asked them where they lived, Bella, Sam and lizzie
couldn't say a word...bag.doc}
star- good discriptive comparison
star- well writen peice. I think it will work really well with the new story line in this bit when you edit it. Your writing will suit that sernario nicely

{Chapter9- Willem Ross.doc} {Chapter 25 - Natasha McGregor.doc}
{Chapter 10.doc} {Chapter 26 dean.docx}
Leigh-Ann Richards#.doc} {Chapter 22.doc}
{Chapter 12 Cowlishaw.doc} {Chapter+27-+Dillon+Thomson.doc} {Chapter 22.doc}

{Chapter 10.doc} {Chapter 26 dean.docx}
{Chapter 11 - Daniel Abbott.docx} {Chapter 24 Leigh-Ann Richards#.doc}
Cowlishaw.doc} {Chapter+27-+Dillon+Thomson.doc} {Chapter 22.doc}

Add the re-edited chapters here ready to print.... {chapter 4 of class novel by jenny gillies.doc} {Chapter 25- Natasha McGregor.doc} {Chapter+20-+David+Moody new.docx}
3- Becky.doc} {Chapter+27-+Dillon+Thomson.doc}{Chapter+27-+Dillon+Thomson final.doc}

Add the re-edited chapters here ready to print.... {chapter 4 of class novel by jenny gillies.doc} {Chapter 25- Natasha McGregor.doc} {Chapter+20-+David+Moody new.docx}
Willem Ross.doc} {Chapter+27-+Dillon+Thomson.doc} {Chapter 13-Nathan 3- Becky.doc} {Chapter+27-+Dillon+Thomson.doc}